Review Detail of yunisao in She Will Be Mine

Here’s my shameless review of my story lol. I also wanted to clarify a few things about this novel. The story does have mature content, for example some violence and ***. However it will not have any type of forceful intimacy. Its going to be all consensual. I’m an ******* writer so I welcome all constructive criticism. I will try to update 2-3 times a week. Maybe more. Again, I’m not a professional writer and this is more of a hobby for me. Also if my grammar is off I do apologize. While I am in the states, english is not my first language.