Reviews of Second Coming of Gluttony: Night King

uh huh, I'm writing this fanfic because of two reasons. first is to use this as an experience. I really want to continue my first work but as I don't have much experience in writing, I decided to pause it and focus on fanfic first. so please if find something wrong you can tell me about it! and second is there is so little ff about scog. I just want to satisfy myself and also for those who read this ff. I always enjoy reading, so I hope you would also enjoy my little work.

Is this gonna have anything to do with elden ring because of the front cover i realy want a ff of elden ring .....................................

how can somone take a already good setting from the original and make so bad work! half the chapters are cringe moments the powers of Mc is just out of nowhere and with out logic

Interesting so far hope to see more.👍

Bro.. you should definitely read fic from Spanish if you went continued this fic. I think that Spanish fic most more complete information, if we compare it with this fic. That's why I recommend it to be read. I think the name is, 'El Paraiso' something.

Amazing idea for a story, if the release speed is right, it will definitely become a hit. .................................................................................................................................................

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Just what I like.An op protagonist with villian tag as a bonus.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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I'm honestly just very lazy and don't want to write a full review but just know author, I very much enjoy your work. I cant wait for the future of this book.

Muito bom, gramática perfeita, desenvolvimento tanto da história quanto dos personagens são Excelentes@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

The protagonist of this story might be OP. But the world of the novel MEMORIZE from the same universe and its main character became a god and this story happened a few years earlier. If I were the protagonist, I would lose all motivation, because along the way of The Second Coming of Gluttony one can hardly become stronger than the main character of MEMORIZE or at least the angels from the same story.