Review Detail of CopyPaste1 in Second Coming of Gluttony: Night King

Item: Second Coming of Gluttony: Night King
Rating: 2.2

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CopyPaste1Lv132yrCopyPaste1

how can somone take a already good setting from the original and make so bad work! half the chapters are cringe moments the powers of Mc is just out of nowhere and with out logic

Second Coming of Gluttony: Night King

allhailsiomai

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allhailsiomaiAuthorallhailsiomai

okay, I understand, thank you for the critic. anyway can I ask you where is the awkward part is? also, please explain to me why do you think the MCs power is without logic as you have said.

2yr

LordInsanityLv5LordInsanity

The grammar is really bad, you should re-read your work or get grammarly, or get someone to peer edit.

allhailsiomai:okay, I understand, thank you for the critic. anyway can I ask you where is the awkward part is? also, please explain to me why do you think the MCs power is without logic as you have said.

2yr

Ydo_DominnusLv2Ydo_Dominnus

I don't know if you're too much of a perfectionist, or I've awakened the same MC's eye ability to ignore mistakes while reading.

LordInsanity:The grammar is really bad, you should re-read your work or get grammarly, or get someone to peer edit.

2yr

ShatteredMusicLv4ShatteredMusic

I have awakened the mc's ability as well it seems

Ydo_Dominnus:I don't know if you're too much of a perfectionist, or I've awakened the same MC's eye ability to ignore mistakes while reading.

2yr