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Reviews of Rise My Elementals!

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NJSG
NJSGLv5NJSG

Found a Hidden Gem, really like this novel and im hoping you don't drop this. And if you keep on trying everyone will start to notice your work, so don't give up too soon my man!!! Alright Cheers to you my guy or girl idk :3

M_W
M_WAuthorM_W

The novel releases an update every day around 10pm - 12pm (+8 GMT). I will release 2 chapters a day which would have around 1.5k-2k words per chapters, which is around 3k-3.5k words a day. Their is no problem with the daily release since this novel already has 122 chaps (as of now). Thank you for reading and please keep on reading, hahaha! ~M_W Cancer

madskie00017
madskie00017Lv3madskie00017

I am a big fan of the concept of Elementals. From the title and the synopsis I got attracted by it and started reading the chapters. The story really impresses me much. It exceeded my expectations. Every chapter never fails to bring interesting plot and development. The flow of every chapter is consistent. Keep it up Author !!

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5PsyLoRD

I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet these hands will never tap anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!

Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv5Aeternabilis

Sry, this story has a great premise and is very interesting I have enjoyed it so far however for me romance can make or break a story. His fiancee that killed his brother, ruined his city, tried to kill him etc is scum. She is made out so far to be the first real enemy of the mc. But now it's looking like it's gonna be one of them where she was "forced" to do it or some sht. Maybe to protect the mc from something else. Ending with her getting with the mc, in the end, all is forgiven. I can't stand this tbh... It completely ruins it for me. A female enemy that ends up with the mc. Look's like it will be one of them books... Now a couple of things that are annoying to me as well. She randomly out of nowhere just invites herself in to live with him. He says nothing at all and allows it. Okay, I can ignore this. Then she schemes against the mc getting others to atk him. When he then slapped and spat at her afterwards this made me very excited and looking forward to the future as I thought this will be unique. Something different giving me hope for the book. Now she invites herself onto his fraction by showing the mc a letter that he has to protect her? Then the mc says nothing and lets her join gaining all the benefits and letting his ENEMY on his secret on how he is breaking the rules with a loophole. WTF. This makes absolutely no sense, let's ignore the idiotic thing of letting her in on his secret but I'm sorry she needs protection from the mc? How shtty is this excuse? Isn't she the student rep? She is meant to be stronger than the mc (if he doesn't use his trump card) Plus how will she be in danger at SCHOOL. She will be surrounded by her fans helping her etc... The mc has just lost all of the backbone he had shown earlier, losing all respect I had for him. Every time it's played off with how he will make her "pay" later and how he has all these "plans" for her. I don't give a flying fck what he plans. Were here in the here and now. Great you have plans. That doesn't mean you have to let her completely roll over you all the time until you can eventually in the far future execute them. Plus he has the backing of a power equal to empires what is a tiny family from a kingdom gonna do? Yeah, gl to the author. Not for me

Zhang_Kai_Rui
Zhang_Kai_RuiLv4Zhang_Kai_Rui

Not very good development for the characters or the world. The novel lost me when the MC revealed all his power to someone he "trusts" even though they are in a mutually beneficial partnership... he new the woman for like a week and reveals a life secret just like that. Ridiculous.

DemonicPriest
DemonicPriestLv3DemonicPriest

A good novel and i hope i can read it more... Please don't drop this novel like your first novel and keep up your good work.........................................................................

JoN_KinGsley
JoN_KinGsleyLv1JoN_KinGsley

I really like the novel πŸ˜ŠπŸ’•, it allows me to explore my imaginations to some certain level or extent, though am not a kid, but little wild imaginations won't hurt right 😊☺. Love ❀ the characters (πŸ’ͺLEO) and the rest. Love how the writer adds new characters to the novel and how the writer makes new plots very interesting 😁☺. But TO THE WRITER:- You have little problems with your spellings and sentences some times, but still great with exploiting your vocabularies πŸ’ͺ. The major problem am having is the "OVER EXPLANTIONS" the writer makes when explaining certian things like kingdoms, cities even villages and towns, and even still "OVER EXPLAINING" something or someone that has already been explained. Sometimes even "OVER EXPLAINING" people who are sometimes not really relevant in the novel, making we the readers tired to some extent and sometimes skipping the non important information and sometimes makes the novel a bit bulky. Try reducing the "OVER EXPLAINING" problem. It most times covers more parts of a chapter or episode 😩. But never the less I love the novel β€β€β€β€πŸ’•πŸ’ͺ. Kudos!!! Keep up the good workπŸ™.

Padty
PadtyLv2Padty

Reveal spoiler

daolordzii
daolordziiLv5daolordzii

the grammar is horrible try using Grammarly................................................................................................................................................................................................. ................................................................................................................................................................................................. ................................................................................................................................................................................................. .................................................................................................................................................................................................

Alexban123
Alexban123Lv3Alexban123

This book is truly great and you can say it a hidden gem too as it's should have been more popular. Anyway you should give it a try you would definitely like it (98%).

DAOIST222222
DAOIST222222Lv2DAOIST222222

This is just so amazing. Lovin it since the first chapter. The character design and writing quality is supreme. I'm lovin this story development and the world background.

Christopher_Ketner
Christopher_KetnerLv3Christopher_Ketner

just started reading this one but the mixed tenses in the sentences are really of putting. I'm sticking with it for now, but if the writing quality doesn't improve, I'm done.

Nathan1
Nathan1Lv5Nathan1

to me it feels like the story is very hollow. not enough info is being giving about basically everything. I feel the background is just glossed over and not explained in enough detail. also, we dont really know much about what a mage is at this point. it's an ok story just too much info left out.

DAOIST222222
DAOIST222222Lv2DAOIST222222

This review is for exp but I'll be honest . I'm in love with this novel

TheAncientOnell
TheAncientOnellLv5TheAncientOnell

The book is average nothing great but not bad. World description is messed up I mean the other races description was miniscule. The academy arch is just plain and horrible especially the system point thing borderline stupid turn upcoming mages who should be training spells into mercenaries who work jobs in order to get money to buy what they need I mean what kind of prestigious academy treats its students that way. The arch it's self is going to take long enough to bore you out of your mind. This people are not students but work force to do hard labour just for some miniscule points. The academies way of doing things is barbaric its should even be called an academy. No wonder humans are losing in this world their way of doing things is stupid. Infact the whole book is base on the academy to me it's boring as ****.

Debojit_Debnath
Debojit_DebnathLv2Debojit_Debnath

Another good story ruined because the author thought- it is missing something. It is missing the same old cliche of prince saving the princess.. and then starts the so called real story.. where she is cold at first and the mc doesn't mind her attitude.. this goes on until the girl falls in love with the mc because of all the hardships they hve suffered together.. and other *hit. Anyway. I am done.. and the chapter where made the mc instruct his elemental to lift weights was stupid. It is as if the mc was living in a cave. 18 yrs of life in a magic world and also from a mage family and he knows nothing about magic, not even about mana stone( he has to read it in a book when he got the stone).. he was so busy that he didn't even have time to read books he had to improve his strength and knowledge and here he yaps about wanting to be strong.. what a load of *ull *rap. So as I was saying, he makes an elemental, an energy being to do *PHYSICAL* stuff.. like getting hit, weight lifting and physical damage.. having found the wind mana, he didn't even try to use it.. and the b*ll *rap about the mc feeling the same as the damsel in distress is so unbearable.... How he wipes her tears even when just moments ago she tried to use u for her plans...??? I am really done.

Hender
HenderLv7Hender

nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice

Jerry55
Jerry55Lv3Jerry55

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