webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of Christopher_Ketner in Rise My Elementals!

Review detail

Christopher_Ketner
Christopher_KetnerLv143yrChristopher_Ketner

just started reading this one but the mixed tenses in the sentences are really of putting. I'm sticking with it for now, but if the writing quality doesn't improve, I'm done.

altalt

Rise My Elementals!

M_W

Liked by 3 people

LIKE

Replies5

M_W
M_WAuthorM_W

I don't know how to use that so-called Tense. My mother tongue is not English, and I also suck at the subject English in my school, so I'm really sorry about that.

Annaiel
AnnaielLv5Annaiel

why would you want to write a book in english then? wouldn't it be easier to write in your first language?

M_W:I don't know how to use that so-called Tense. My mother tongue is not English, and I also suck at the subject English in my school, so I'm really sorry about that.
M_W
M_WAuthorM_W

Would you believe me if I tell you I want to learn english? HAHAHAHAHA

Annaiel:why would you want to write a book in english then? wouldn't it be easier to write in your first language?
KilThrall
KilThrallLv5KilThrall

Did the grammar ever improve?

Christopher_Ketner
Christopher_KetnerLv14Christopher_Ketner

never found out. author got an attitude so I didn't feel like finding out

KilThrall:Did the grammar ever improve?