I'll be honest, this is borderline interesting and dope, but also ****ty. Look only reason RI was cool was cause the selfish and OP MC, and the fact that he kinda planned his ****[ well plan as much as a MC can in a chinese bk] and he was a ruthless individual...here u follow through with ur idea, and that kinda is interesting but also ****ty...ur MC acts how a normie SI would act..thats interesting but also boring. plus he dosnt even have all the memories.
Like there are 4 chps and nothing really interesting,,,also its like u omitted some ****,,,,the ' MC ' was a genius before MC SI's himself, and yet none of that is here...what happened? Everyone thinks he is a retard cause he dosnt have the OG's memories and yet they all forgot his genius past
point is, RI was interesting cause the MC was cold ruthless individual...and here MC being some naive kid dosnt really seem that interesting,,,RI was strong to stronger