webnovel
Rildec
RildecLv114yr
2020-08-11 18:35

Novel feels a bit plain, I like the ideas, but you make the mc so monotonous and boring. Generic ill just go with the flow if the story self insert. Mc also has forgotten some bits about the novel, which i guess is to make the fanfic more interesting? Or maybe cover up any plot holes that may occur 🤷‍♂️. Most of the major events are still canon so far, few changes here and there but nothing that has affect much yet. Mc still has c grade etc etc

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Related Stories