Akdude48
As the writer of this book I want to give write a review for the story's description- it will start with simplicity and sometime boring world all around the MC but later on the course I guarantee you that it will be something worth reading(my viewđ đ ). So please do read it and give it your full support by giving reviews and comments and votes as well!!
To potential readers: Go read it. It's interesting enough for now (16 chapters out). To our dear author: I know that you said english isn't your first language (not mine either) but you really have a problem with capital letters. It's getting better but for the names it's not Xun shung it's Xun Shung. Same for others names. Talking about names, Shung isn't a Chinese character (it doesn't exist in Chinese) same for Pio and many of your original names. Shun (č) is a Chinese character. Your names sound Vietnamese to me but I'm not an expert. I fairly like MC character and I'm waiting for more. Best regards.
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I will be honest with the review, First, in the starting chapters your naming process was pathetic but in later chapters you make progress regarding that so no problem. I have read it from the starting, when you just started and I gotta say your updates are a little slow for me. Now comes the good part- After 6-8 chapters your fan fic progressed immensely, from naming to using capital letters and from the little overboard character of MC to him being a witty individual. After 10 or so chapters the value of each chapter increased so now I don't feel bad about the late release, you perfectly blend your originality of character(MC) with a little touch of Fang yuan's behaviour. So overall your fan fic is interesting enough to keep readers go furthur with it.
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Woaah ini adalah fanfic Ri yang bagus, mc kejam, gila dan pintar hahaha, semoga ceritanya tidak di jatuhkan oleh penulis. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
From what I have read of this story it easily sets as one of the best RI fan-fics i have read being one that dosen't make the protagonist o.p from the start nor giving him some cheat skill or system. It stays true to the world in which it dosen't go introducing things from other stories as power-ups and has the character actually be mostly human in that he has to try fail and work for his goals. The story does have a few inconsistent points in it such as a recipe for a gu or how a path works be slightly different but hey thays what a fan-fics is about. All in all love the story.