Review Detail of Evil_For_the_WIN in Reverend insanity: Arrival of a new demon
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To potential readers: Go read it. It's interesting enough for now (16 chapters out). To our dear author: I know that you said english isn't your first language (not mine either) but you really have a problem with capital letters. It's getting better but for the names it's not Xun shung it's Xun Shung. Same for others names. Talking about names, Shung isn't a Chinese character (it doesn't exist in Chinese) same for Pio and many of your original names. Shun (舜) is a Chinese character. Your names sound Vietnamese to me but I'm not an expert. I fairly like MC character and I'm waiting for more. Best regards.
Reverend insanity: Arrival of a new demon
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Thank you so much for your time. It means a lot. As for the mistakes in names, I started writing this fan fic just for fun at first and didn't researched enough to give proper Chinese name to the characters. But after the receiving all the comments and views Iam now taking it seriously. I will surely make up for the mistakes in future chapters and about the upper letter case in names as well. Once again thanks a lot.
Akdude48:Thank you so much for your time. It means a lot. As for the mistakes in names, I started writing this fan fic just for fun at first and didn't researched enough to give proper Chinese name to the characters. But after the receiving all the comments and views Iam now taking it seriously. I will surely make up for the mistakes in future chapters and about the upper letter case in names as well. Once again thanks a lot.