I will be honest with the review, First, in the starting chapters your naming process was pathetic but in later chapters you make progress regarding that so no problem. I have read it from the starting, when you just started and I gotta say your updates are a little slow for me. Now comes the good part- After 6-8 chapters your fan fic progressed immensely, from naming to using capital letters and from the little overboard character of MC to him being a witty individual. After 10 or so chapters the value of each chapter increased so now I don't feel bad about the late release, you perfectly blend your originality of character(MC) with a little touch of Fang yuan's behaviour. So overall your fan fic is interesting enough to keep readers go furthur with it.