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I read a few chapters and just couldn't no more. There is bad translation with grammar errors. Also it is so rushed that you don't know what is happening, while other stuff doesn't make sense. There really is no explaining on the world background. Also skipping most of the process of training to get stronger. Two major flaws of this novel is bad translation and being rushed.
the story is **** because u made zaho feng care about his father and mother and make him think about helping them for that reason the story **** u should have done like the original story about zhao feng not caring about his parents or the continent he started from that shy i think your story is bad so if possible rewrite the story and do it n a better way