i think even if u don't join the protagonist group u can take the teacher doctor from them and that swordswomen with purple hair i don't remember their names and let them be part of his harem an group, because they have some good profession , swordsmen and doctor

i don't really know. maybe have a happy life or exciting life or just going on an adventure. but not just for surviving .

a novel where the main character goal is survival is too boring i suggest that u change his motivation to other things, not going back to his world.

you know i thought about it and, any child he have with zearia, if they inherit both parents trait will be stronger than the protagonist.

why don't u update the children status, include their age and their spouses .

you know since u love writing about GOT u could write a story about dance of dragon where u self insert some character into beilon targaryan and make him live i think it would be a great story

so the bleach power ranking goes like this : yhawch>aizen>ichibi>yamamoto>germey, if he wasn't so stupid> ichigo.

yeah but I gave u a an enhanced version of that sword. because the usage of that sword consume the lifespan of the user, so this sword is better, yet still there is some aspect of that sword better than this one, like that sword can copy all the abilities but this one can only copy like 5 abilities or something like that. also what's the problem woth two swords having similar abilities, I mean look at rukia and toshiro, shiba isshin and yammato, shinji and aizen. It's not a big deal that there are already some sword with same ability.

i have some ideas for the abilities of his sword if u didn't decide yet. I was think about something like copying other swords abilities and can use them all at the same time, for an example his shikai can copy other shikai abilities and his bankai can use the bankai of said copy, you can enhance and perfect the idea, u should put some limit to the numbers of sword he can copies, some condition to copy, like seeing them or clashing with them. at the end it's just a suggestion. what do u think about it.

you said that u don't want to give him a broken ability, but u know that every villain in bleach have one. (spoiler)heck even in the Quincy war arc if they didn't kill each other or yhwach killing them, the shinigami wouldn’t be able to win, they would’ve massacred the shinigami. so please don't give him something weak

please don't give him elemental zanpukto, give him something good like illusion, or space-time zanpukto. for instance, shikai=space, bankai=time, or something like that. anyway this is a good story so far.

technically kenjaku isn't the one holding the world back, he is trying to advance it by making humans evolve. on the other hand, all the main group trying to do is to stop him and make the world as it's (holding the world from evolution). so technically he should fight them, not kenjaku .

you know that cleave/slice is stupid cursed technique. it's weak and there are many more useful and stronger cursed techniques. for manga readers it's clearly shown that it ain't even sukana cursed technique. so change it to something stronger, give him something strong, op and under appreciated like cursed speech. heck even jugo fire cursed technique is better.

is he Reincarnated person or not. and does he know about the plot of dxd?

isn't he like 24 before reincarnation. why is he acting like a true 14 years old child. did he lost his memory or something???!!!

you know u ruined the whole story just like that

you are an amazing and great writer but I don't think writing a continuation for reverend insanity novel is a good idea. Because it's the novel is to complicated so I think, it's better if you write a fanfic from the beginning

when are u going to continue your reverend insanity story?

the most important thing to do is killing itachi then let him join akatsuki or not your decision

so u are doing a dxd, dc fanfiction and not make it a big harem, are u some what of a dumb