The pov changes so much that I really don't know what's happening. Half of the novel is about the history of got which is boring, while the other 1/4 of novel is a different pov unrelated to continue the plot an make word count. The MC really has no goal besides to wake up drunk in a bed with women. MC is dumb an makes bad decisions. MC barely makes uses of futures knowledge to his advantage. There really is no change to plot or story at all, should just actually read the original book of got be more interesting.

This person doesn't know how to use wishes, like at all. A dumb MC an a simp to bardock. The chapters are short. I don't recommend reading this at all.

Bad just bad. Don't read this at all. First the pov shifts around so much it just doesn't make sense anymore. Second half the chapter for each chapter is about the author thoughts about the novel. Third the book is written like a rough draft of a script for a play or movie. Fourth word count, the way the novel written is for word count. 5 there's really no plot or story focus, if there is it's unnoticeable. 6 The start is weird, I didn't even understand it, the novel make you the reader think really hard to figure out what the mc is. From what I understood is mc is a reincarnated from our world. If I am wrong about that then it's the authors fault. 7 The authors does improve a little bit though not enough to make a difference to the novel.

hopefully harem right?

The book misleads you. I thought this was a male character for novel but it started out with female lead. I just can't take my time to read until MC get his male Bodie back so I will drop this or skip intill MC gets his male Bodie back. Plot is ok though. Character development okish though could use more work. Spaceship battles aren't good you write it like a sea battle some of the time. Though way better than most who write spaceship battles.

The books grammar is ok. This is similar to another better book. Why 1 or 2 stars is simple it's because your focus on equality and women. At least the way you write about it. Now the way I wrote this sounds bad, but in that time frame, historical women and equality was bad for a reason which brought me out of the book an made reading this fustraiting to do. Also you make the MC feel like a wimp while making Unrealistic decisions no one would make. There isn't much character development or any story development that took my interest to read. To sum it up don't read this if you don't want to see left vs right politics view while reading.

Trash don't read. Chinese is the best is all this novel tells you. MC no brain dumb. East blue is East China sea in this novel. Same with others.

A great start of a novel. I just love novels about changing history with the foreknowledge. A great read to pass the time. Only 8 chapters out so far though. An I actually learned something, hitler was a vegetarian at some point in time. Keep going author don't stop writing this.

I gave up on this filler book. Because that's what it is. Why that type of devil fruit? simple plot armor. Should have just eat the first one.

chapter 85 ruins the entire novel for me. it just doesn't make any sense at all of the mc decision. A dumb mc after chapter 85 just to create plot an fillers.

Bad translation an I mean really bad. At least in some other Chinese novel they keep character names the same but in this novel none of the names or titles are correct. Not even the moves or devil fruits itself. Worse than mtl. Though I like the concept of this novel.

This is one of the greatest novels I have read so far on WN. Though author if you can increase the updates for the chapters I really like this novel. Well besides that the plot is very interesting an the MC is smart an very likeable. I also like the world building.

Don't read this. MC is just bad. Plot is really bad. Plus I have read so many novel starting as a baby that I just can't read these anymore.

The MC make dumb choices, basically MC is stupid. Also MC sounds like a child in every way. Why doesn't the system explain each of the ten kido, an even if that's ok then MC should have experimented each one in detail. This is only getting two stars because you can read this an bleach is one of my favorites.

I REALLY CAN'T READ THIS. What I mean by that, the grammar is ok great even it's just the plot or storyline I can't find myself to push through reading. So a wast of time reading this.

I wanted to give you a 1 star but I didn't just because I could actually read it. Though nothing makes sense. Author you should read it yourself after each chapter it will help you alot. Don't give up.

More please great concept for a interesting novel that will pass time for me. Hopefully this isn't dropped. Also make the chapters a little longer if possible.

A really great book to read. Though chapter 79 ruined it for me. I will most likely stop reading this after chapter 79 because MC just told his entire life story to the heroes after first confront when MC did nothing wrong. MC was ok an intelligent intill chapter 79 why make MC dumb?

Great concept though. Good grammar with an interesting power. Why mc get poster wanted dead alive? For plot also why not make shadow slaves? I am probably going to drop this novel. MC ok ish while the chapter are a little to short for me. Author you shouldn't change the pov to much I could tell you are kinda struggling with that. Though that's up to you just do you since it's your book.

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