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Thought it would have been horror-ish (since pennywise), it wasn't. the mc is quite literally trash in all sense of the word, there were some good moments but that's practically it. the MC also did a lot of questionable things which makes me concerned for the author. for short, good idea, terrible execution. had to turn off my brain to attempt to keep some idea of understanding, didn't work as now I wish I didn't read this. I hope if the author ever retries this, that he/she/them could try and plan more and also just be more creative.
I know this is fanfic and all, but why go to different worlds. Can't the story continue in the same world, and penny-wise is a powerful ghost of a town, not the entire world. You could have changed the penny-wise world; into a world filled with more powerful scary ghosts and monsters. And is following the canon really important in fanfics. I never get it; it's a fanfic, the first thing you should be doing is kicking the canon out. It would be a great story if u had started with penny-wise not being overpowered. Although I don't know how many abilities penny-wise has, u should have only given him abilities like. Illusion, and getting stronger with the power of fear. the more fear he gathers more powerful his illusion ability becomes. And that it, I have watched IT 2; but the ending didn't feel like classic penny-wise. Anyway instead of being a dimensional being, can't he be more normal and all of its backgrounds were just an illusion that penny-wise created.
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Author your story is very good as mc is ruthless when needed and smart by nature. Doing everything thoroughly and i really liked u killing off beverly as multiverse has infinite no of waifu so why stuck to few. And keeping them like a harem is also idiotic when u can keep getting more so i just hope u take this recommendation and keep writing.