I know this is fanfic and all, but why go to different worlds. Can't the story continue in the same world, and penny-wise is a powerful ghost of a town, not the entire world. You could have changed the penny-wise world; into a world filled with more powerful scary ghosts and monsters. And is following the canon really important in fanfics. I never get it; it's a fanfic, the first thing you should be doing is kicking the canon out. It would be a great story if u had started with penny-wise not being overpowered. Although I don't know how many abilities penny-wise has, u should have only given him abilities like. Illusion, and getting stronger with the power of fear. the more fear he gathers more powerful his illusion ability becomes. And that it, I have watched IT 2; but the ending didn't feel like classic penny-wise. Anyway instead of being a dimensional being, can't he be more normal and all of its backgrounds were just an illusion that penny-wise created.
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