Reviews of Reincarnated as a Girl in a World of Cultivation.
Reincarnated as a Girl in a World of Cultivation.
Tennouji_Kotarou
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- Writing Quality
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- Character Design
- world background
Tradition give 5 stars to yourself Β° ~ Β°. Well, I hope to get your interest in this story. Again I will make some things clear. This is a Yuri, so he will not be a man again. I don't know how many girls there will be in the Harem, but I have 4 in mind for now (one of them is Mc's sister, yes, ******.) The 4 protagonists will have a certain focus on the story gaining some special chapters for them, but the real protagonist of the story is Mc. I must say that the story of the protagonists was to my liking and perhaps even more fun than that of Mc, lol. And my cultivation skills are limited, any new skill and explanation I will gladly accept specialist brothers Β° ~ Β°.
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this series is well thought out and I Im enjoying the way this story has developed all the way to the entrance exam arc, so obviously the story is good and I'm definitely going to keep ready. hope to see more updates soon... but, even though I would like more updates, doesn't mean I want for the typos in the previous chapters to be overlooked. I will still give a 5 star because what defines writting quality Is not the editing, it's actually the way in which the author conveys their intent. again though, PLEASE FIX THE GENDER TYPOS THAT PLAGUE EVERY CHAPTER WITHOUT FAIL. PLEASE. Female= She, Her, Miss, Lady, Girl, woman, Beauty, Queen, Empress, Mistress. Male= He, Him, Mister, Guy, Boy, Man, Handsome, King, Emperor, Lord. The above are examples and make it extremely clear what is boy and what is girl. seriously, I see less grammatical issues in your series as a whole than I do Gender Typos in 2 chapters, and this is far from a joke. please get an editor, or at least someone who reads in english to tell you boy or girl/he or she/Him or Her. and after finishing the current entrance exam arc, please edit your story before continuing. as much as I'd like more chapters, fixing this minor issue that annoys me like it's a big mistake would be for the best. if someone speaks Portuguese and can cleanly translate in a sentence what I'm trying to say, please do so. Or better yet, help edit this series for the author.
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I really am enjoying reading the story. I do have a couple of complaints. 1st is that the MC takes way too much time whining about getting turned into a girl. Just get over and accept, it's not like you have a choice in the matter. And the 2nd when a character's gender is first established stop changeing that the gender ever other sentence. It might work for chinese liturature, but is confusing and down right annoying in English liturature. Other than that i really enjoy the story, plotline is well thought out, the characters have been nicely flesh out.
