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MediocreSkater1dCommentedCharecter development lol
"The god who blessed me...Aeolus. If you really blessed me then why did you let it happen. Faunus, if you really blessed the land then why didn't you protect the village."- MediocreSkater1dCommentedCh 44 Small Interlude: A Peek into the Past
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Sorry Stacy but it don't work no more 馃様
As my fist made contact, I felt a cracking sensation on my knuckles - MediocreSkater1dCommented
Stacy's mom has got it going on 馃幎馃幍
"I'm gonna miss Stacy from the new whorehouse though." - MediocreSkater1dCommented
Plot thickens
[Rosaline鈥擟urrent Affection: 1/100] - MediocreSkater1dReplied to Wataterp
I'm guessing for more battle hardened enemies they won't even care about the pain from getting hit in the balls, rather that might as well hit a vital point
By taking advantage of the universal weakness of all males, I brought Thug #2 down. What did I do? I simply kicked his balls as hard as a could. I could hear *crack* sound when I did it as the thug whimpered. The thug fell down on the ground while holding his crotch. I felt a little guilty for doing this to a fellow male, I instinctively held my own crotch, somewhat feeling his pain. - MediocreSkater1dCommented
Ah so he's finally thinking of getting revenge
I walked around the big garden, taking in the sights. I sat down in a randomly picked area and started practicing the aura breathing technique. Slowly but surely, I could feel my aura pool in my body getting bigger and the energy getting thicker. It was a slow process, but I have to make do with it鈥擨 have to get stronger if I ever want to find and kill that thing that destroyed the village, I need to get stronger. - MediocreSkater1dCommented
I really thought he'd already want to become strong enough to take revenge on those people who massacred his village. I'd make it my life mission to kill those things but he just moves on with life like nothing happened and only when he's getting sold to slavery that he wants to get strong
This is it. I'm going to be sold, something I never thought was ever gonna happen in my life. I just wanted to live peacefully. If it wasn't for that thing... massacring everyone... forget it. What's done is done. I won't be able to move forward if I just keep wallowing in the past. - MediocreSkater1dCommented
Foreshadow?
Being eaten and self-destructing to deal damage to the worm and defeat it. - MediocreSkater1dCommented
I like it, the grammar is a bit off but since it's not your first language it's impressive, I also really like the world you set up here and the mystery element is present as well. Overall I have high hopes for this book as long as you improve your grammar or find an editor
Ch 9 Chapter 9: The Train - MediocreSkater1dCommentedCh 5 Chapter 5: Soul Power
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A piece of cake huh...
"At last, my hard work paid off I need to sleep I don't want to endanger my life any longer, they said I could start tomorrow morning. Rewriting that story is gonna be a piece of cake," Morris laid down on his bed before closing his eyes and falling asleep without a second passed - MediocreSkater4dReplied to sucroselikerCh 15 Responsibility
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It's obviously up to you if you want a sun breather but without it it's almost impossible to defeat Muzan, also the sun breath was the origin of all breath styles so it should at least be mentioned in history. Also you don't need to have Tanjiro to posses to sun breath, you could just have an oc use it.
Ch 13 Light spar - MediocreSkater4dCommentedCh 30 V.2 Chapter 2
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Bro is going to destroy the entire weapons market LOL
'It doesn't really matter to me, I should pack up and head to the dungeon.' - MediocreSkater5dCommented
+1
Pandora's Box - I like this name because you neither know what Alvar will make XD and breaking into the workshop would be like opening the box :P - MediocreSkater5dCommented
I wonder how old the mc really is, I remember at the start of the book someone(was it Maxwell?) said his grandfather remebers what great deeds he has done which suggests that his time of glory happened 2 generations ago meaning he could be in his 80s or even above 100. As for him looking young I don't think Alvar is mortal as he said he doesn't need sleep.
Ch 11 Annoyance - MediocreSkater5dCommented
A lot of people are forgetting that he came to this world not only to meet up with his friend but also to REST. Obviously he will not get any rest if he is bothered by gods and goddesses due to his unique soul as well as his extraordinary capabilities will catch a lot of attention which is something he does NOT want. Btw this book is really well written so far and I hope you keep it up!
Ch 6 Hostess of Fertility
