Charecter development lol
Sorry Stacy but it don't work no more 😔
Stacy's mom has got it going on 🎶🎵
I'm guessing for more battle hardened enemies they won't even care about the pain from getting hit in the balls, rather that might as well hit a vital point
Ah so he's finally thinking of getting revenge
I really thought he'd already want to become strong enough to take revenge on those people who massacred his village. I'd make it my life mission to kill those things but he just moves on with life like nothing happened and only when he's getting sold to slavery that he wants to get strong
I like it, the grammar is a bit off but since it's not your first language it's impressive, I also really like the world you set up here and the mystery element is present as well. Overall I have high hopes for this book as long as you improve your grammar or find an editor
A piece of cake huh...
It's obviously up to you if you want a sun breather but without it it's almost impossible to defeat Muzan, also the sun breath was the origin of all breath styles so it should at least be mentioned in history. Also you don't need to have Tanjiro to posses to sun breath, you could just have an oc use it.
Bro is going to destroy the entire weapons market LOL
I wonder how old the mc really is, I remember at the start of the book someone(was it Maxwell?) said his grandfather remebers what great deeds he has done which suggests that his time of glory happened 2 generations ago meaning he could be in his 80s or even above 100. As for him looking young I don't think Alvar is mortal as he said he doesn't need sleep.
A lot of people are forgetting that he came to this world not only to meet up with his friend but also to REST. Obviously he will not get any rest if he is bothered by gods and goddesses due to his unique soul as well as his extraordinary capabilities will catch a lot of attention which is something he does NOT want. Btw this book is really well written so far and I hope you keep it up!