Reviews of Reborn In Modern family as Iron Man!

Hey there guys, I made this fanfic mainly due to the lack of updates by another Author on modern family, So I got impatient waiting and decided to write one myself. I hope you guys can point out any mistakes I may have made in the Chapters and where I can improve them. Otherwise leave a comment letting me know you enjoyed the chapter, it's a great motivator. Enjoy the Chapters that are to come. For your Information, the Story will begin to have changes but in the first season atleast nothing Major. But the later seasons is where the Fun is at. 🥳

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your title is REALLY misleading me here when MOST of the novel progress in the wednesday universe. as much as i love the series, I'm here for modern family fanfic and there's not much development in that family in this regard overall a VERY frustrating and Rush development honestly not recommended

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I read up to ch.35 and all i can say is I'm completely disappointed with this ff and there are just too many things to complain about but I'll list all of the ones that i can remember soo far: 1. The english is overall okay there are some mistakes but you can easily understand what they are supposed to mean 2. Logic is thrown in the trash 3. Some events feel forced 4. 1 or 2 weird a*s pulls 5. The story is written in a way that is convenient for the author instead of mc 6. An AI that does things on its own and hides info from its creator 7. Everyone is suddenly stupid and glosses over everything the mc does 8. The author's information isn't completely clear so he mixed info of iron man 2-3 together 9. It's supposed to be a modern family ff mixed with other tv shows but soo far it's just a Wednesday ff 10. The mc became a watcher, so he doesn't mind loved ones getting hurt if it helps the plot stay the same (even though he already changed some of it) 11. The way the mc solves issues is really weird Overall unless i completely turn off my brain this ff is frustrating af even though it had its good moments If someone needs examples of any of these points just ask so i can elaborate on it since it would take forever to fit it all here.

This story has a lot of potential, keep up the good work. I will be supporting in any way I can.

I wanted to like this Im always up for some slice of life type fics. throwing Wednesday into modern family that's fine. I mean he can build iron man armor so basic supernatural so the armor has a use sure I could enjoy that. however the first supernatural is an unkillable infinitely evolving monster and there will be more. you made the first supernatural enemy a final boss? then the slice of life aspect has gone I mean seriously the title is in modern family as iron man. and there is little to nothing about a chill slice of life sitcom.

Your story is not bad but I expected something related to the modern family and putting so much supernatural doesn't add up and your system is too overpowered basically you can bend reality to your liking (makes appear what you want) good luck with your story

It was good until the frog came in then it just got boring. I feel like other stuff should have been added in slowly. Also after the first few chapters it’s really not even a modern family fic anymore

Could not read after ch. 35, MC turned into a watcher and is just cocky for no reason even after almost getting killed, The way Wednesday is introduced is very stupid, he just goes to her is like hello i know ur father kill someone and here is the proof and the she falls in love with him 1 chapter later

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Honestly very good would recomend to read

Author was doing so good, modern family x wensday was so smart and it worked ... until the totekbracu whatever their called its so dumb. Idk how you produced such good chapters and then throw all that talent in the trash make stupidly dumb monsters for the mc to fight for NO REASON AT ALL. bro you should like remake the whole thing and take out the tocken whatever bs

the story is going nowhere and it's getting a bit boring, worse with slow updates and few words in each chapter. I would have liked him to act more like Tony Stark, of course you don't have to make him a playboy but he stole a lot of money so he could start a company and start inventing technologies, he's not even prepared enough to deal with problems, he seems like your typical mc Chinese who, instead of preparing for trouble, rushes headlong into it.

At what point does this stop being a wednesday fanfiction? Because I’m 30 chapters in and this was supposed to be a Modern Family fanfic with elements from other shows. Instead, almost all of the plot has been happening in the wednesday side of things, and I haven’t even watched that show. I didn’t mind when i saw it in the synopsis because it said the fanfic had ELEMENTS from shows such as Wednesday. I don’t mind having some things here and there I don’t know, but the entire fanfic so far is based around the wednesday plot, and now he’s attending their school and it’s just getting deeper and deeper into that plot which is just not what I came here for at all

I was expecting slice of life with mc trying to be the top drag of the world and having some romance and trying to live life, but after ch 84, it’s battle after battle against supernaturals, and at first I did not mind the supernatural and fiction bs, but now it got too much that there is no more slice of life and dude either seems to be building something or fighting some supernatural being, the story is losing the touch of when I first read it, I hope the author slowly reverts back to that slice of life feel. And I understand adding the fighting and supernatural bs since he literally has abilities that are not meant for the world, but I just wish that it would not be every day full of battle and no slice of life.

The story started out strong. But now it has added so many elements in its story, that it has become too convulated.

I just want to know what happened to modern family and what happened to Wednesday his girlfriend?

okay the fanfic fusion is good the story was good actually but.. it's sucks. well it's gonna be. because the story is just a loop he's powers is points he earns everytime he Destroy a original story or a canon event and when he Destroy a og story or a canon event THE world gonna get a Immortal enemy that wants to kill him. so it's just a loop.