this is basically a copy and paste of jbubu story reign of the new protogenoi. you should probably mention that too.

you're definitely a good writer. i will probably give this a chance if you make it to at least the first giant war. this is the second or third story ive read with this concept. I'm hoping the mythology/main world doesn't get lost amongst the world hopping. I've read many a story where it starts jumping and the main world just kinda disappears and it just hops before it gets dropped. i hope you continue on and enjoy yourself hope to eventually read this story

its your story, however you are really underestimating lucifer. even the tv show he sent a full grown man flying with a simple push and basically ignores damage(when not near decker) and is only really weakened while in her presence. but even on the vampire scale the twilight vampires aren't even up there in regards to power with gifts making up the difference.

this is bad. she is the daughter of god. and mortal vampires are stronger then her not counting the additional immortal buffs.

honestly the fact your character is a divine being and instead of creating training that would kill mortals like and infinite gravity chamber for massive gains he is trying to create shortcuts is kinda ridiculous that by all means should be useless on a divine being.

yeah its full of women that will peak his interest with the way the character is unique and powerful im all for ivy and harley.

seems like. I really enjoy yhis story so thanks anyway

fair but your characters attraction to quality women in a universe like DC he cant come outta there without one or four ladies for his horde not counting hexa

so many chance we can get a preliminary dc harem addition list

hopefully there's an explanation for the extreme over reaction here. we've all been jealous of something at some point. I could potentially understand him stewing in class but the next thing he is running through a forest throwing a tantrum that the girl he likes is just talking to another dude. FFS he didn't catch them rutting on the desk.

I'll give it a chance but your MC has to make up 7 years of knowledge and even potter only had three years in difference. it's just gonna be a bit much to make it an understandable tournament without the Mc coming off as a god since he has literally weeks of experience in the magical world as a whole.

yeah his inclusion in the tournament is a bit much. and the fact that dragons will be the first thing he hasn't had a flying lesson or anything yet isn't that a bit much? sure the Mc has proven to be powerful floating everything in class, but the kid doesn't know anything past a few days of classes at least harry was a fourth year.

I wanted to like this Im always up for some slice of life type fics. throwing Wednesday into modern family that's fine. I mean he can build iron man armor so basic supernatural so the armor has a use sure I could enjoy that. however the first supernatural is an unkillable infinitely evolving monster and there will be more. you made the first supernatural enemy a final boss? then the slice of life aspect has gone I mean seriously the title is in modern family as iron man. and there is little to nothing about a chill slice of life sitcom.

here we go again, a decent opening only to never hear from it again until you restart. still waiting on that new dhampir chapter after another restart.

why is he world hopping so early? that's annoying.

you have a variety of good ideas too bad you never follow up. if this does actually progress I'll read it otherwise I'll see what the next reset is.

a couple days huh..