Karate_master_b
Hey, Hope you enjoy my FanFiction or my Novelđ
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Merge different things together, like an alchemist, the only thing limiting him is his imagination or well, my imagination đ
tony lost it, hulk didnt
its a story with many charecters, not just everything surrounding the mc, to be fair however, I could have done a better job. Its a plot and the charecters move it forward, The Mc is a charecter, he is the main one, yet not the only one. Like I said maybe I could have done a better job not quite sure how however, I wasnt really provided with to many directions specifically pointing to things out for me to go and improve them.
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he is playing it safe, isnt that obvious, if he can gain the ability to turn into Lightning from a fruit he randomly found, one can wonder what kind of abilities will a org like Shield have in store, maybe even have the ability to kill him. He doesnt know if they do or not, and he would much rather not want to find out.
My guy you are following the mc on a journey of self-discovery and finding himself a path since he is a NORMAL person who got these powers, Im sorry, this is simply not just another bland Op power tripping story where the Mc just knows what to do, Do you think that is realistic by a normal human's human standards? I think its is kinda unrealistic dont you. You as a reader are meant to follow the Mc on a journey, I have clearly written the thought process of the charecter behind the decisions they make so that you as a reader can understand from the charecters perspective.
The Physicallity of One piece and a normal human in Marvel is diffrent, anyways this is not a nerf, its a way to make him even stronger once he is through with this, consider this just another normal arc.
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It must be a little confusing chapter 1 đ , The first thing was supposed to happen in africa im referring to hulk vs hulkbuster, next events is the battle for the Cradle and then the last battle in sokovia where pietro is supposed to die.
read chapter 19