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what i want say this novel fanfic novel i most like you know....i like this novel....he dont add another character.... and when time chapter about fighting....i can easily understand and can imagine...i read 2 3 time the new chapter you and not bored for me....and give me nice dreaming about what happen next chapter and when he go immortal world...hahhaha....i think grammar very good and your idea is genius....hope you dont give up just like naruto....thank you
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Man i have to say i'm usually too lazy to write a review but i just like so much this fanfic that i decided to help every author i want to read more. i like the approach that i find new at least for me. Just more chapters man and if i have to say i dont find it that much bad that the MC is already so OP it just depends on how you write the story from then on. Keep up. Oh i said man but if you re a girl i like you as much
A well. Developed story for the Naruto series as well as a different perspective on people's lives and thoughts. Good characters though some grammar could be improved. Since it is the authors first story I am not holding it against them. Adding in an extra note to the author. Don't take low scores too seriously. Two reasons I have send for them. First trolls who do it for giggles. Second people that just don't like the type of story. So keep it up and thank you author.
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