A well. Developed story for the Naruto series as well as a different perspective on people's lives and thoughts. Good characters though some grammar could be improved. Since it is the authors first story I am not holding it against them. Adding in an extra note to the author. Don't take low scores too seriously. Two reasons I have send for them. First trolls who do it for giggles. Second people that just don't like the type of story. So keep it up and thank you author.
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