what i want say this novel fanfic novel i most like you know....i like this novel....he dont add another character.... and when time chapter about fighting....i can easily understand and can imagine...i read 2 3 time the new chapter you and not bored for me....and give me nice dreaming about what happen next chapter and when he go immortal world...hahhaha....i think grammar very good and your idea is genius....hope you dont give up just like naruto....thank you
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