Reviews of 20105802105528705

it's my first novel, so there will be mistakes I try to improve it in upcoming chapters and yes I'm here to review my novel 5 stars shamelessly

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World background: naruto charcter design: black semi-long hair, hyuga eyes (search it up), peachy skin. Story development: decent, I can tell this probably going to be a bit slow-paced, since he is still a genin and the third war barely started (chapter 34). Updates are good. Writing quality: grammar mistakes then and there, since its the author's first novel, there is going to be lots of mistakes.

Idk how i feel about this book the author is all over he feels almost as if hes indecisive of what to do next hes also using a lotta common tropes nothing too original on top of that the title picture has absolutely nothing to do with the book im guessing he put it there because he thought it was cool🥸🤨😐 overall a mediocre book at best.

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Barely legible, kindergarten English level probably written on a phone... needs a fundamental rewrite. The world setting serves no purpose outside of a familiar name. Avoid!

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Grammer's a little rough, but tolerable. main character is written well in my opinion. starts a bit rough, but gets better, a few thing could be explained better, such as the stat box (starts with no mention of it, then it magically appears with no explanation on how he got it). but all in all a good read if you stick it out. Great job, look forward to the next chapters. [img=update]

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Rough to read but somewhat enjoyable 5 stars to support the author! Keep on going and if possible edit older chapters during your free time!