Grammer's a little rough, but tolerable. main character is written well in my opinion. starts a bit rough, but gets better, a few thing could be explained better, such as the stat box (starts with no mention of it, then it magically appears with no explanation on how he got it). but all in all a good read if you stick it out. Great job, look forward to the next chapters. [img=update]
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