Review Detail of MarkinUrMum in

World background: naruto charcter design: black semi-long hair, hyuga eyes (search it up), peachy skin. Story development: decent, I can tell this probably going to be a bit slow-paced, since he is still a genin and the third war barely started (chapter 34). Updates are good. Writing quality: grammar mistakes then and there, since its the author's first novel, there is going to be lots of mistakes.