Reviews of Re:Start In Pokemon
Re:Start In Pokemon
PratikG
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Except the updating speed its very bad.... The mc does not even need to try he gets all the legendary... Although he has to train them bit no he lets them train on their own... Their is no "bond" between the pokemon and the trainer (except the legendarys) he just catches them and then wins a gym battle..... The system basically gives the mc everything.... Their is no character development.. We dont talk about mc's parents except the 1st chapter....instead professor oak takes him to his presentation not his parents no they r not even mentioned....... Basically this is a giys sandbox fantasy with poor character and world development
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It is a good light pokemon fic if you have nothing better to read you can give it a try, note: it has questionable things for certain pokemon connoisseurs and quite a few bad flags for self-insert regulars Personally, I think he has many cheats, some of them are not consistent with each other; He can steal data and do tasks, that alone is more than enough to reach the top not only in the world of pokemon but also in other types of worlds (See WoMW Leylin Farlier). Gacha, come on, that's super lazy. A minor world, legendary pokemons. A backpack with most (or all) of the Pokemon * 900 items up to B / W 2. Not to mention the system with "hidden tasks" is my personal enemy in the vast majority of stories. Anyone of those is enough to make a fic on your own, having them all not only makes it less serious, if not the point where they feel they are not taking advantage of it. Original Pokemon are fine as long as they are not abused, only one so far and it is an Eevee that sooner or later will bring out a dragon type in the canon. Many interactions are missing, it feels like a game record rather than a story, the MC does not interact with anyone, there are only actions and certain ones are quite ridiculous even by the pokemon standards. He doesn't seem to have a complete plan for the story, just a bunch of ideas stuck together like a collage, an experiment to say the least, or maybe a rough draft for a better story later when his writing gets better.
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I can accept the system, I can accept having the shiny legendaries, I can accept all his pokemon being shiny, I can accept how illogical the adults who accept all the b.s. that comes out of his mouth, but making fake pokemon like a dragon evolution form of eevee? Well demm you are just like the current pokemon people ruining the master piece that it was with Z-moves and Gigantification b.s.
The dialogues are plain and lackluster. The plot is common but interesting. There are a lot of grammar mistakes. I suggest you proofread more often. Aside from this, the mc is op and needs to struggle more often. Stability of updates, automatically five for me. Sorry, but it's hard to comprehend when there are a lot of grammar mistakes. Still, don't drop this book because of my review. Your readers are counting on you but sorry again, I will be dropping this.
