Reviews of Pokemon the Force
Pokemon the Force
Lixon99
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
A good story. But please don't let him go all solo. Having a traveling partner is good whether it is male or female. travelling gets boring if you don't have someone to talk to. Believe me. Pokémon is fine and all but they don't actually talk. Your story is good I love it. Just write it.
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It could be better if you don't make the protagonist op too quickly and rather write longer volumes and add multiple supporting characters. Follow some of the thing from original Pokemon series but make it a bit realistic. Don't take the same Pokemon as ash but take different useful and cool Pokemon. Add different Pokemon backstory and don't skip different training parts.
The grammar is terrible and is in need of proofreading or perhaps you could hire an editor. Still, don't drop this book because of my review, you have a lot of fans. Keep up the work and good luck! I'm sorry but grammar mistakes really irritate me. It ruins not only the writing quality but also the plot because it would be hard to comprehend. Stability of Updates, this is an automatic five stars for me. I usually rate all novels five stars when it comes to this category. The plot is good but common. Most Pokemon fanfic plots are usually like this. Basically, the mc meets god type of fanfic. I've read a lot of fanfics with this type of beginning but still, your plot is good and interesting. I'm sorry but I have to drop this novel in chapter fourteen. There are too many errors and mistakes, it not only irks me but deters me from my read. All the best to the author and I hope this review will not leave you disappointed or angry. Do not drop the novel for your fans!
There is no force power used in this fanfic lol maybe a tiny bit in the absolute beginning or him healing Pokémon who fainted but that’s it. It’s name of this fanfic yet it’s not used. The MC is beyond extremely childish and moody at random times that just don’t make sense. He’s able to beat legendaries like it’s nothing and captures them wayyyyy to early in his journey. Lastly his family that does nothing for him but ask the world from him and when he was going to get a “sister” who is actually a cousin since her parents died he started to throw a hissy fit. Don’t waste your time
Terrible grammar, even if it's not your first language, proofreading is required. One dimensional characters and MC's character is too childish for my liking. It's just my personal opinion so don't stop the work. I am dropping it because the grammatical errors are irritating me and sentence formations sometimes are even worse. Sorry dude.
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Hey, making another review, after this arc make a poll to vote on what region he would go next. I also have a feeling that you would take a short break, 1-2 weeks or so, after this arc then continue. Please don't drop this, this still has a lot of potential. The only time i would understand you on dropping this fanfic is that if you finish the 3rd or 4th arc and sadly it maybe when you finish the 2nd arc but hey, it isn't your job and its just a hobby. In regards to the fanfic, it is still really good and atleast doesn't have that "cringey" factor that most pokemon fanfics have but I have a bad feeling it would lose its touch in the 2nd arc but from the looks of it, it still has its potential so good luck in that front.
