well, u are right, it's about who does it the best😁 But I felt it too coincidental to have same features.... Anyway, I feel Medieval era is more flushed out with better English and character development (my opinion) This one is good too XD

I agree but most things are just giving me a Deja Vu. May be caz I just read the Medieval Era fanfic. Also the timing is too coincident when every concept connects like they are twins😅

For now,, it's a 4 star. Mainly by the fact on how similar it is to Pokemon: Medieval Era Writing quality is alright but needs a lot of improvement. There are mistakes here and there but it's readable. Mainly the commas and some grammatical errors in the sentence.... I hope you proof read or use Grammarly to make it better Story development is decent until now but Character design needs some improvement. In some places the talk between characters is quite plain but would imagine this is your first time writing so I will go easy on that. Update stability is a 5 star as they seem pretty fast. World background would have been 5 if not for how every thing almost resembles Medieval Era fanfic on this site. The red eyes, ability, potential, and even the concept..... I was slightly disappointed with this but will surely re-review it after 30 chapters. I want to see more development so that I can see the improvement in various departments.

edgy but cool

Like the concept but just hate the fact that its a replica of Pokemon: Medieval Era with a slightest chance of limiting it to one Pokemon. Knowing that, that fanfic started a month ago, the timing of this one is also too coincidence. The Red Eyes, the ability, concept and the potential grading..... can you not be more obvious😓😓

Great choice, love Eevee

😑dude, the name of this fanfic and this eyes red when the ability is on giving me bad vibes. I hope it's not what I am expecting

I think it should be Tailow?

Great concept. You should never miss a fanfiction such as this Writing is great albeit minor mistakes. Very minor which can almost be ignored. Story development is the best out of any fanfics on this site. Amazing concept, you just immerse into the plot the author writes around Pokemon. Character design is very 3 dimensional. No established character feels irrelevant and no conversation feels forced. Every character has a sense of purpose to move the plot rather than just staying there. Update stability is great with 7 chapters a week for now. The author uploads big enough chapters with around 2500 words so I guess it's more than enough. World background is what keeps you hooked. It has such a unique concept that you almost feel like you are reading an original book. No System, No Harem, No Canon characters, No Team Rocket or any groups but still hooks you with its pace and intriguing plot. I would dare say that it has the potential to be the best pokemon fanfic on any site. Just stick till 12 chapters and you will know why.

honestly, I would be way happy if this part of the story doesn't exist at all, at least I hope it gets better

I can't handle the cringe, every sentence from last 3 to 4 paragraphs is so generic and cringe, hope it gets better...... fingers crossed

One Word Review: Decent. I will start with the Pros and then go with the cons which may or may not help the author. Pros: Different approach to a pokemon fanfiction by making MC not know much about pokemon even if he is from Earth. Author is trying to build a personality to the characters which is good. Interesting choice of pokemon and author also does a good job of not just giving away hidden abilities like many fan fictions do. Cons: Slow Pace (too slow for it's own good). Approach is different but story seems plain and bland at places(cliche too). Advice to author: People who read Fanfic are very familiar with Pokemon so you don't need to explain in detail about every Pokemon or try to build a thing like what Pokemon type it is and stuff. For example, MC asking what type his 2nd Pokemon is and Nurse Joy trying to build a suspense for two chapters doesn't really interest readers, it seems like a drag. Because the one who is reading it already knows even though the MC doesn't. Slow pace novels might be a good build-up for characters and world background but you seem to get lost in the idea of keeping it slow for the sake of it. There are number of scenarios where I felt, it did not help the character or the story in any way. You really need to interest the readers even if it is paced slow, so try creating interesting scenarios to make up for it. If you don't like my review then ignore it, if you do, then it's good for your story too. Trust me, I wrote Pokemon fanfic on this site and I am not blindly advising. Anyways good luck with the improvements in the book. I will review it again if it changes ✌️

Great novel, I love the fact that this novel takes place in the pre-historic age. The writing quality is good and the character design is perfect. Story development is a bit slow to medium paced but that's what you expect from a good story anyway. The world background is very fresh because of the different storyline, I hope to see more from this story. Great potential..... Keep it up, author ✌️. Don't drop it as I did with my Pokemon: Other Side

from 28th or 29th

I think the title says late April🧐, will update from 28th or 29th

nope, from 28 or 29th I will start updating. Semester ends on 26th so been busy

will update from 28th or 29th, been busy with the semester

nope, my semester is getting tough so had to take a break till it gets over. Late April I will start again

he is immune, he fainted caz of the pressure that came out of MC due to a breakthrough

yes