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You know, I won't berate you as this is better than mine but yeah, why do I feel like I've read this before? Then it came to me that it's eerily similar to my fanfic (albeit yours is a lot better than mine seeing that I was 15 when I wrote it) but yeah. You have your own plot and all but I just can't get rid of that feeling that it's the same as mine but VERY different. Never mind this negative rant, it's just that I can't get rid of the "feeling" you know? All in all, it's good fanfic with entertaining segments here and there and I actually enjoyed reading it, so props to you.
You know, at first, I actually liked "H4R3m", but the fact that multiple novels/fanfics destroyed that viewpoint is a sad thing for me. I have seen a few great H4R3m novels but most of them are either finish/dropped. Good thing though that the people who make H4R3m fanfics put a disclaimer that warns the reader that it will be the "Gotta catch them all" type fanfic. Well, that's also my opinion. Now, I don't like harems, but that doesn't stop others from liking them, that's pretty much my point.
Well, it's close enough.
Saiki Kusuo? XD
? Ayaka was already known as a character because she was in CBT 1 (Closed Beta Test), it's not a leak, but yeah, I think I get it.
Hmm, a being similar to Ophis in looks is being used because she wants to find a world to live in. Then the real Ophis from DXD gave power to the Hero Faction because she wanted to regain her silence in the "Dimensional Gap"... COINCIDENCE?! I THINK NOT!
Hey, don't lie to me and say you haven't done the same, lmao
?! FROM THE MOVIE!
Yeah, dude, I always imagined myself having OP powers in DxD and I realized how unrealistic it was. If I were ever to really get reincarnated in DxD and wanted to survive, I will have to join a faction because all in all, I will never get overpowered like I want to.
Same.
Haha, sorry.
Ok ok, please keep your romances to yourself because this fanfic is made by the author. Find another fanfic that has Sae as the main one... If she is the main one here though, then lucky you.
Yeah, but I think I will actually go for the "I am not ready" for I am just a coward hiding behind a profile pic
I call it soccer because there is another game called football... But I think it was rugby... I DON'T KNOW
You should use Grammarly, it will improve your grammar
In your heart, she will be your waifu
He means in webnovel... There are so many fanfics here that have most MC's that think with their dicks
Isn't that a Schnee's hair color...? Meh, ignore me.