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Early in the development yet much better then 99,9% of the novels in here. Would recommend to anyone who likes the related tags of ‘game world’, ‘adventure’ and the others. Characters are individuals and not lifeless bag of filling. Writing quality is great and the story is far from the cliches past the first two chapters.
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The story so far is great. Much better then all “game” type of novels, but still using some of the cliches (which I personally dislike). Stability of updates is a bit lacking, but if you read it after a serious number is out that won’t be a problem. Quality can be increased a bit, but is much higher then the average. World is not yet completed but sound realistic and interesting, complex as well. Characters have their personalities and while a bit shallow in comparison to famous books are better then most light novels, where only MC get screen time. They can at least say ‘no’ to him.
There aren’t many chapters so far and the story is just truly beginning and I’m not sure which direction it will take. So far this story has been very interesting and a somewhat different perspective. It is a fresh story and doesn’t have some of the annoying cliches similar books often have like seemingly no need to train.
Alright so imo this novel is worth a 4.6 even though its got good pacing and update stability. My problems for this novel are the story development and world background. Now don't get me wrong the story develops at a nice steady pace but all the traing could be sped up. Now my problem with the world background is that not much is known, like for example the MC doesn't know what the knights Academy is called this is just lazy writing in my opinion. Author could've said something along the lines of 'my "friend" Carl was supposed to be working on its story' or 'That "bastard" Carl was always slow in his work while goofing off' this is a way to slowly hint at the otherworld whilst also giving off slight info as a reason instead of resorting to the previously sloppy story background. Don't get me wrong I don't hate this novel I just have high expectations for it so forgive me if I'm hard on you Author I just love your novel and don't want it to fail.
Alright here is the first review. I like the book as a whole, but the lack of background of the mc before reincarnate is bugging me. The concept of having 2 person in a body is quite interesting and new for me. I think pace of the story will be quite slow, and it is fine, just hoping the release rate of the chapter will be high hahaha. I wrote this review om chapter 8.