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Review Detail of Memester_Damon in Pathfinder: Sacred Order

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Memester_Damon
Memester_DamonLv144yrMemester_Damon

Alright so imo this novel is worth a 4.6 even though its got good pacing and update stability. My problems for this novel are the story development and world background. Now don't get me wrong the story develops at a nice steady pace but all the traing could be sped up. Now my problem with the world background is that not much is known, like for example the MC doesn't know what the knights Academy is called this is just lazy writing in my opinion. Author could've said something along the lines of 'my "friend" Carl was supposed to be working on its story' or 'That "bastard" Carl was always slow in his work while goofing off' this is a way to slowly hint at the otherworld whilst also giving off slight info as a reason instead of resorting to the previously sloppy story background. Don't get me wrong I don't hate this novel I just have high expectations for it so forgive me if I'm hard on you Author I just love your novel and don't want it to fail.

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Pathfinder: Sacred Order

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Muspon
MusponLv13Muspon

quick question does he get the body back from the kid or no

Memester_Damon
Memester_DamonLv14Memester_Damon

Yes it's like Mc said. He was in a cutscene

Kingvex
KingvexLv14Kingvex

Isn’t the idea that although he helped build the world it was not fully fleshed out and he didn’t build the entirety of the world only helped with certain aspects and was part of the designing team so he was involved with discussions of the progress this world is also now reality as it was once a game there were things that were unrealistic therefore when turned to reality a lot more details were added to make it reality it would make sense that he knows a lot about the world however at the same time to know nothing

Memester_Damon
Memester_DamonLv14Memester_Damon

True

Kingvex:Isn’t the idea that although he helped build the world it was not fully fleshed out and he didn’t build the entirety of the world only helped with certain aspects and was part of the designing team so he was involved with discussions of the progress this world is also now reality as it was once a game there were things that were unrealistic therefore when turned to reality a lot more details were added to make it reality it would make sense that he knows a lot about the world however at the same time to know nothing