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Overlord Harem System
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Overlord Harem System

Abysalyounglord

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Read Overlord Harem System novel written by the author Abysalyounglord on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is Fantasy stories, covering romance, action, reincarnation, r18, system. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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..... Mc is pervert and otaku. he got habit of secretly oggling mature milf beauties so in order to fullfill his fantasies he help out with their work and secretly takes advantage from it. Mc got into trouble by helping a beauty but in return beaten by thugs. Got into accident in crossing the road. Meeting the god. Getting the wishes......... Typical cliche scenario becoming isekai.. _ _ _ _ _ _ A/N:There might slow progress in regard to romance but there is harem tag so It has some snu snu moments but not in the starting. There are actions after certain chapters everyone pervert likes. So don't be disappoint about it I will get there eventually as I am also man of culture... _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ "I don't own anything except the Mc and some 'inserts' characters " "I'm very novice in writing so tips or helping hand are welcomed"

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IsekaiAnimes
IsekaiAnimesLv3IsekaiAnimes

just for having the idea and creating a Story, I will support you author!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

jaktennison
jaktennisonLv5jaktennison

This story development is quite good for novice writer If he can write like he is doing and improve it little bit it might become bit better what it is. Anyway It's just starting who knows it might come better with time.

IsekaiAnimes
IsekaiAnimesLv3IsekaiAnimes

Thanks for the chapters~~! Very good Author. Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood Cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Wow, the concept was amazing! I am deeply moved by my imaginative thoughts. I hope the author will update the initial chaps as they tend to be typo-heavy chap. As the other review swappers have said. Start your paragraphs with capital letters and end with periods or commas, question marks or exclamation. Comma if an active convo or period if it was the end of convo. Don't forget to also put (") quotation marks in the dialogues. Typos needed to be edited as soon as possible. 😉 Good luck with the spirity contest! I hope to see yours there!

Kamijou_kaito
Kamijou_kaitoLv4Kamijou_kaito

keep up the good work author and don't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

LawWillOblivionK
LawWillOblivionKLv4LawWillOblivionK

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Davidwatts6
Davidwatts6Lv1Davidwatts6

the story was interesting, I loved the MC the fun was accurately poured into the story but there were grammatical and punctuation errors which I guess author has improved in further chapters Great work author

heyitsmejovi
heyitsmejoviLv2heyitsmejovi

This novel is well written! The author creative ideas is excellent! Intersting synopsis and also exciting. Looking forward for more nice chapters, author!

Proteety_Promi
Proteety_PromiLv2Proteety_Promi

The topic is totally unique. We don't usually find stories like this. But it's good and entertaining. Good luck, author! Keep up the good work!

Cold_Ai
Cold_AiLv3Cold_Ai

I don't know how to write a review, but here's a 5 star.🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪

Draigofenixe
DraigofenixeLv5Draigofenixe

La novela va muy bien, sigue ala MC paso a paso , no es completamente OP pero sigue entrenando y se gana sus relaciones lentamente, al menos no piensa con la cabeza de abajo todo el tiempo, en fin una interesante novela.

mrant12
mrant12Lv1mrant12

Love the writing skill behind this book. Fantastic world building and description of events! Not something I met everyday. Job well done, fellow author!

Bunny_Jinnie
Bunny_JinnieLv2Bunny_Jinnie

This is going to be a nice story! Some little tips: You should start your every paragraphs with capital letter. You should mark your every dialogues with "this" punctuation. I found no other mistakes and I feel great while reading it! Keep it up dear author! I cheer you!

mauro_godoy
mauro_godoyLv2mauro_godoy

No entiendo las reseñas dando tan buen puntaje y hablando bien de esta novela ...en serio? Sigh ...los primeros 5 capitulos ya son suficientes para dejarlo ...si se pueden llamar asi ...porque 4 son relleno lo demas explica un poco las cosas ...mas o menos

A_Stevenson
A_StevensonLv3A_Stevenson

All characters other than mc stolen from anime/manga, story is a compilation of po*n system novel on this site and some other cliche system concepts. On top of that, the english is severely broken. Should probably use grammar checker instead of just google translate. To summerize: practically no effort or originality involved.

_hestia_
_hestia_Lv2_hestia_

The story development and the grammar in the first few chapters could use some editing but it has its appeal and I can certainly see the attraction of the plot.

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