just for having the idea and creating a Story, I will support you author!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Wow, the concept was amazing! I am deeply moved by my imaginative thoughts. I hope the author will update the initial chaps as they tend to be typo-heavy chap. As the other review swappers have said. Start your paragraphs with capital letters and end with periods or commas, question marks or exclamation. Comma if an active convo or period if it was the end of convo. Don't forget to also put (") quotation marks in the dialogues. Typos needed to be edited as soon as possible. 😉 Good luck with the spirity contest! I hope to see yours there!

Thanks for the chapters~~! Very good Author. Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood Cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

This story development is quite good for novice writer If he can write like he is doing and improve it little bit it might become bit better what it is. Anyway It's just starting who knows it might come better with time.

I just started the ride and I must say that I am loving it honestly.

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All characters other than mc stolen from anime/manga, story is a compilation of po*n system novel on this site and some other cliche system concepts. On top of that, the english is severely broken. Should probably use grammar checker instead of just google translate. To summerize: practically no effort or originality involved.