Reviews of One Piece: The Hundred Swords Pirate [Rewrite]

I'm just following the tradition of self reviewing author, don't mind me, just passing through. I hope you enjoy my work and stay with me for a long time. ---------------------------------------------

I see that you're trying to write a story of a proper pirate in the One Piece world, interesting idea. Grammar wise it's decent, MC is a has a mind of twelve years old but can be an ***** when it's needed, it's a good One Piece Fanfict, I'm looking forward to what will you do in the future.

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From what I've read until chapter 8, the story is decent, it's doing slowly and not too rushed. Grammar and sentencing are alright I assume the author's native tongue isn't English. Overall it's a Good One Piece Fanfiction.

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I love this it’s an insane fanfic and a cluster-f**k of stuff and it’s just great. Just read it. 14014014014014914014014014014014014014014010401401401401340140

So far its really Decent story... But Let see what u do in future.. ☁☁☁⚡☁☁☁ ☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁ ☁⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡☁ ⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡ ☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁ ☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁ ☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁ ☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁ ☁☁☁⚡☁☁☁ ☁☁

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No bad review so far... Let's check this out then.... 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊

5 stars for the win ghahahaha. Lets bring the BAD BOYS OUT!! The story is about a Yakuza trying to be a Pirate with a good for nothing god for a stalker hahaha. Just kiddin.

Coo story keep it up ###################################################################################################################

Cool idea, keep it up -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Good story so far and badass MC character, anyway thank you for novel.

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