Review Detail of daw_SCORE in One Piece: The Hundred Swords Pirate [Rewrite]

I see that you're trying to write a story of a proper pirate in the One Piece world, interesting idea. Grammar wise it's decent, MC is a has a mind of twelve years old but can be an ***** when it's needed, it's a good One Piece Fanfict, I'm looking forward to what will you do in the future.