The_Lazy_Daoist
I dont like it. Honestly the only reason for the 5 stars is for support. I like FF's when an MC SI's into an important character in a series. But damn man, joining strawhats...FF are meant to do something new you know. Not follow main cast with some few changes here and there. Its supposed to be a reader making their own BS and **** and add ****. But IDK, u said u might add some elements so it might be unique, not new, but unique- so I hope its interesting. GL.
It's uhh... Complete wish fulfilment without any sort of real story honestly... It takes seven chapters to finally get to the One Piece story when a single chapter summarising his life could have sufficed. His life before being instered in One Piece is so fucking boring. I had to speed read it, and by that point, lost my will to read the story anymore... It has a generic system and boring wishes from "god"... which for me is a minus, but a lot of you guys seem to like it. Chapters are very short, like 1000 - 1500 word, but some of that is just 'System' crap so you could argue it's even less. Yeah. Look. It's a new author, so check it out and give some constructive criticism.
I loved the concept when I saw it and the story didn't really dissapoint. I enjoyed up until now and though it is still early to judge, I feel like this will be a really great story. The writing isn't the best, it's what you would expect from a fanfiction. The story is good enough up till now and hopefully will be in the future. The only problem I have is the upload consistency and wishes that the author uploads daily, I have given up many stories due to losing my patience with slow updates on top of slow paced stories(imagine waiting a whole week for a chapter where the mc just monologues his plans that's pretty obvious) I understand not being able to update daily but if so please make sure that the chapters are lengthy enough and has more content than just thoughts or monologues. Hopes this ff doesn't get dropped anytime soon.
i advise author that you rewrite it again from the beginning.... too much power from the beginning will make the story boring in later period. use the same plot like the original but show sanji as the main character, don't make him too much powerful where he would just chill in the background when his crew are struggling...
Plz keep on Writing this is a intresting novel we are waiting for this plz keep on relasing and donβt drop this novel ππππππππππ[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Keep writing. Do not listen to the toxic sect leaders on this site. They always whine one way or another. Never feeling grateful Thanks for making a fanfic on one of my favorite characters. Also, about joining the straw hats. It would not have made sense if he did not join the crew. He is Sanji. Cheers.
I dropped when I read the synopsis that it will still be part of the straw hats. I dropped when I read the synopsis that it will still be part of the straw hats I dropped when I read the synopsis that it will still be part of the straw hats I dropped when I read the synopsis that it will still be part of the straw hats I dropped when I read the synopsis that it will still be part of the straw hats
The intro was too long and boring it's annoying, the only part I appreciate is his decision to join the straw hats, one piece fanfics with captain mcs are boring and stupid, people hating on joining straw hat crew.. the crew who has fun, adventure have loyal friends, they meet a lot of chicks and you'll probably be the only one who gets laid.. aside from being in marines the straw hats are the only reason I'd go to one piece
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