It's uhh... Complete wish fulfilment without any sort of real story honestly... It takes seven chapters to finally get to the One Piece story when a single chapter summarising his life could have sufficed. His life before being instered in One Piece is so fucking boring. I had to speed read it, and by that point, lost my will to read the story anymore... It has a generic system and boring wishes from "god"... which for me is a minus, but a lot of you guys seem to like it. Chapters are very short, like 1000 - 1500 word, but some of that is just 'System' crap so you could argue it's even less. Yeah. Look. It's a new author, so check it out and give some constructive criticism.
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