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Reevo3hCommentedCh -2 Potential Crew- Reevo20hReplied to ConqueredSleep
Go back and edit it if you noticed the mistake....
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You switched point of view in the middle of your chapter. You should fix it.
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- Reevo2dReplied to ALEX_J_MERCERCh 477 My SI Stash #77 - An Inscriptionist's Tale by BANIX (TDG)
- Reevo3dReplied to Smoove_Like_Butta
Look, man... You randomly threw in a 'system'. It feels totally wrong and forced. 'Trash' was probably needlessly harsh though. I just hate system novels.
[99...100%. Integration with pocket complete. Pocket upgraded to A rank. Welcome to your Information A.I, host. You can search for all kinds of information about your old world here but the information about the tower is limited.] - Reevo3dCommented
Oh god. What trash.
[99...100%. Integration with pocket complete. Pocket upgraded to A rank. Welcome to your Information A.I, host. You can search for all kinds of information about your old world here but the information about the tower is limited.] - Reevo3dCommentedCh 7 7. Worst Emperor
- Reevo4dCommented
I thought the Oharan's only deciphered one Poneglyh by the time they were all killed off, and it wasn't one about Joyboy, but rather the name of the ancient Kingdom.
The second thing I stumbled upon was an obscure legend about a many Joy Boy who was supposedly a son of the sea and could speak to Sea Kings. This legend came from a poneglyph that the Oharan scholars had come by last year. - Reevo4dCommented
Not interested in Vegapunk as a love interest personally. Also don't like genderbending of characters. I read these kinds of fanfics to see someone different in whatever way interact in the world I know, not a world the author changes on a whim.
(AN: I was more or less set in stone as to the love interest for the story until some commenter brought up a very intriguing matchup that I have been pondering on. That being a gender bent Vegapunk. Initially I never considered this cause I personally am averse to gender bending canon characters but due to the large amount of mystery surrounding Vegapunk and the lack of much concrete information on him that changing his gender wouldn't change his character fundamentally. There's also Vegapunk's unknown relationship with the revolutionaries so maybe Ivankov changed his gender to hide his past identity as some kind of criminal. Wondering if you guys have strong opinions on this or not. PS. I like Naruto so you haters can screw off with the name. Enjoy!) - Reevo5dPosted
It's pretty good guys. One of the best fanfics I've read for sure. Looking forward to what is in store for us. The only issue is I have is that the author does ask for the opinion of his readers a lot. Now, this isn't an issue per say... but since most readers on this site are brain dead, it worries me a little. lol.
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- Reevo6dCommented
Gotta be either Overhaul or Particle style. No point in the eyes with his Haki.
(AN: Hey guys hope life is good. I realized a while ago that I completely forgot to think about Vinsmoke Gage's wacky bloodline enhancements. With Genus's genius it's only a matter of time before he discovers them so what do you guys think Genus's ability should be. I've got three ideas of my own and any others would be welcome. The first is something like Kai Chisaki's quirk overhaul being able to breakup and reassemble matter. The second is something like Ohnoki's particle style from Naruto that can reduce things to nothingness. The last idea I have is a nerfed version of the magical eyes we find in so many anime (Sharingan, Byakugan, Rinnegan, Mystic Eyes of Death Perception, Geass, there are tons of them). Would love your guys' opinions thanks and enjoy!) - Reevo6dCommented
Hmm. He wants to be free. That's his dream, so his power and abilities should be based around that. He's also a man of science and would heavily analyse combat styles and such before choosing the most efficient. I'd even go as fast to say he's arrogant enough to create a new style by incoporating Hasshoken/Fishman/Rokushiki. As for weapon. Simplicity is best. A single sword like Shanks (a hand guard of larger stature than a katana would be seen as the more logical choice imo)
(AN: I have made official decisions for which route the MC will take and which devil fruit he will eat. That said now I want to ask if you guys have any opinion on the second OC Sterne and how he will fight. I have three templates as of now which correspond to the three straw hat monsters. The Zoro template which is swordsmanship. The Sanji template which is martial arts. And the Luffy template which is extreme devil fruit development. Be sure to note exactly what you want so I can take everything into consideration. Like how many swords for swordsmanship, gentle or strong. Or what kind of martial art for martial arts, (E.g. Hasshoken, Fishman Karate, Newkama Kempo, Rokushiki). And which devil fruit for devil fruit) - Reevo6dCommented
He should take Wapol. Lock him up and turn him into a factory.
(AN: Also I'm at the point where I'm trying to decide who's going to be in the MC's crew. I'm definitely gonna steal some canon devil fruits but do you guys think I should steal canon characters as well. If so, who should I steal. PS. I am not stealing Nami cause no PEDOS allowed and mc is 14 years older than her and she won't be born at the start of Mc's voyage. Also do you guys want me to keep devil fruit pairings and just recruit the users or change the devil fruit pairings. Like he is definitely getting the Baku Baku no mi but should he recruit Wapol or just take it before Wapol) - Reevo6dCommented
Since Genus is a man of science.... It is illogical to limit your eye-sight by styling your hair in such a way!
I am also baffled by the effect of exercise on accelerating human growth in this world. My current appearance if compared to my past life would be nowhere near correlating with my age. I am current 125 centimetres tall making my body more in line with a seven-year-old. I have maintained my previous life's hair style (AN: I love the Genus hair IDK about you guys) and facial structure though admittingly there is still some childlike features on my face. - Reevo6dCommented
Gene enhancing would increase the level of strength he needs to breach the 'limit'... Or at least, that's what I think.
Though admittingly I have been concocting nutrient and gene-enhancing solutions to supplement my exercise. - Reevo6dReplied to Cewu
Seems like it
My experimentation in mysterious energy has revealed more on the nature of this new world. A week into my experimentation I unlocked an external sensory ability through which I have been able to construct a preliminary model of the external world. This ability, which I have dubbed mind's eye is able to gather precise sensory data of my external environment up to a radius of nearly 100 meters. - Reevo6dReplied to Cuervo09Ch 84 082
