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It not a bad fanfic perse, the thing is that the mc feels like Luffy somewhat cause of the lack of brain but lacks the charisma that the other has. the Oc are very well done apart from the mc. I didn't see grammatical errors so far. the main problem is indeed the leet speak is cringe oh so cringe, I guess you could explain it come from the trauma of the Isekai and the mc is trying to fool himself he is still in the game
Honestly you can just consider this as a one piece spin off. The vibe, the humor and even character development is very reminiscent of one piece and shares almost the same quality. Not to mention, (WILD GUESS) the more i read about the MC, the more i am convinced that he eventually be the one beating drums of liberation. 10/10 would recommend
Writing is good…as long as you ignore the fact that MC speaks like a seasoned Cs:go player that hasnt seen the sun in years. MCs character just sucks in general but gets a little better later on and it does kinda make it hard for you to continue wanting to read on. Story development is pretty good and doesnt feel robotic or unnatural atleast sometimes it doesnt