The book is amazing, The characters are clearly distinguished. The story has a sense of mystery to it. And the world background is easy to imagine. The story is told with cinematic ambience that a makes it play out in the mind .Nice one author👍

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This story is really interesting. it seems the wolf decides the premise for love . Leaving Alester to fight for the right to his own emotions. I'm curious as to how far things will develop from here. keep it up author😁👍

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nice chapter

Great way to end it. please upload some more😁

nice execution. the writing needs improvement but the story is interesting

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Damn... Your writing is very poetic. And it draws the reader in to the thought s of the characters in the story. It becomes easy to sympathize with the MC whilst at the same time the story brings about a mysterious atmosphere.

I love the comedy In this book, I mean who would risk death over a bag of potato chips 😂. The story develops smoothly and the pacing of event is good. The diversity of your characters is also admirable. keep it up👍

The world building is quite pictorial. And your writing makes it easier for it to be that way. There are very interesting characters and the way things are going, even I'm getting a bit curious. it's a good story, keep it up 👍

It's a very interesting story. The characters are also quite amusing to read on. The story caught attention as I read on and on. It's a really good book, keep it up author😁👍

.....well....I didn't see that coming. what an interesting story. The writing is nice and descriptive. it made every thing easy to envision. The characters are also quite a mysterious in a way. I like it, keep it up

I like how realistic the characters are. They are very interesting people. The stark difference in personalities is also very clear. The background is very easy to picture aswell and the world around is alive. The only problem I might have are the grammatical hiccups here and there. otherwise it's a good story. keep it up author😁👍

This is an interesting read. Quite comical too

Thank you! Thank you so much for this wholesome story! I swear this is the first story in a long time that has had this much depth in it. And it has only been 4 chapters. The characters are alive, Erin is also a deep character, I don't know what the heck Lily is but I like her too. You're a good story teller that I just have to say. this book is definitely going to my library. The only hiccup here is that you have to improve on your grammar and writing... otherwise I love the story. keep it up, I'll support you all the way with this😁👍

The story is interesting and suspenseful. The events are quite clear. However the way the story is told needs some Improvement as it can turn out shallow for most readers. I recommend reading more than you write. you surely won't go wrong 👍 otherwise it's a very good story, keep at it.😁

Your writing is very good. It makes reading this very swift and it assists with the imagery of the writing. The characters seem interesting enough, surely there's going to be more to expect from them later on. The story just began but I'm already getting a picture in my head of the background. Good work 👍😁

This is going straight to my library. These are o e of the few stories on the site that just absorb my consciousness. The characters in the book are relatable. It hooks the reader from the very beginning. I just have to say that it's a very good book. I hope to see more of it. Good job author😁👍

I like the way the book begins, it doesn't reveal too much about the main character but it reveals enough info. The characters themselves are easy to follow because they're interesting. It's a really good book to be honest...keep it up👍