Review Detail of Britgar in

It not a bad fanfic perse, the thing is that the mc feels like Luffy somewhat cause of the lack of brain but lacks the charisma that the other has. the Oc are very well done apart from the mc. I didn't see grammatical errors so far. the main problem is indeed the leet speak is cringe oh so cringe, I guess you could explain it come from the trauma of the Isekai and the mc is trying to fool himself he is still in the game