First of all, I would like to clarify that I am writing solely for enjoyment.
I intend to write a cliché harem king fanfiction, so there's no need to complain, as it was clearly indicated in the tags that you should have read beforehand.
Although I welcome critiques and advice, I ask you to remain polite. I am merely writte a fanfiction, so there is no need to insult me or attack me. It's not as if I just insulted your family and everyone you know.
If you expect high literature and have high standards, you can leave immediately. While I enjoy writing as coherently as possible, I am not a great writer, even though I am trying to improve as much as possible.
Thank you to those who will take the time to read me.