IWhoMustNotBeName
Hey, it's your everyday Author Here!! Since started writing after those damnable exams....so many mistakes might be there and I'm fixing it..... I am sure some may not like the way I write.... What can I do? After all I'm an inexperience Author who just started writing.... My Last Fanfic doesn't count since I copied half of the words from another...Many blamed me because of it....so I stopped writing that one.. . . . . Please do tell if anything is wrong... whether it is grammar or sentence.... Also give some ideas about the story, girls or powers or even the world's name he should travel in future....Also,..all kinds of greetings are welcome here..(if you understand what I'm hinting then.. Congratulations, you're once a millenia genius.)
Hey guys! Since it's my story, I have right to be shameless, ain't I. And, I have already said that this fanfiction is AU. For example:- Harry Potter was known to a good, naive young boy but in my fanfic he may be dark and evil. Similarly, Danzo, the one eyed B#βΉβΉ_ was evil to the core however here his karma may be more than Uzumaki Naruto.. Don't take this seriously it's just a suggestion..
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Nice story ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ Nice story ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ Nice story ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Good Beginnings......Very Good Grammar... Excellent backstory and explanation. Chapters are sort...I really like sort chapter since it is easy to read and understand.. And There are not many who nowadays write in sort chapters.. almost every authors are writing either long or super long...For example, Wish of a dragon. Every chapters are 100,000 words.. even though I like that story many would get bored reading long chapters. . . So Good Luck and keep posting everyday!
Hmm My advice is don't be too quick to make the main character too strong, if possible, the original main character, don't be too transparent, pity him, make a scene behind about Ehit knowing the main character and or make the villain element more stable it's up to you add more face slapping xina young master so far so good
Best fanfiction.. atleast for a novice like him. What's more that he's only 19 years old.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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