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Hmm My advice is don't be too quick to make the main character too strong, if possible, the original main character, don't be too transparent, pity him, make a scene behind about Ehit knowing the main character and or make the villain element more stable it's up to you add more face slapping xina young master so far so good

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Omniverse Mayhem

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This will definitely happen in his home world... Thanks for the reminder