Good Beginnings......Very Good Grammar... Excellent backstory and explanation. Chapters are sort...I really like sort chapter since it is easy to read and understand.. And There are not many who nowadays write in sort chapters.. almost every authors are writing either long or super long...For example, Wish of a dragon. Every chapters are 100,000 words.. even though I like that story many would get bored reading long chapters. . . So Good Luck and keep posting everyday!
IWhoMustNotBeName
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LIKEAuthor clearly purges the truthful reviews for this novel, there's no way this novel deserves more than 3 stars and I'm being incredibly generous, I personally wouldn't rate this more than 1.5, it's literally THAT bad.
Kw0z:What do you mean “so?” You said the writing quality was good. It’s not.