Reviews of Obito goes back in time to save everyone

To anyone that thinks I am being a douche...go read the first chp...[the stupidity of the MC just shown in the first paragraph],....the character inst obito but some OC ****,,,,,,honestly the ideas amazing but its written badly

I really like Naruto fanfics, I hope this story will be great and I hope the author improves more and try to create other fanfictions. Greatwork

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Yes, just yes. The translation is a bit off the mark, but overall, this story was done pretty well. The story development was probably my favorite part about this story, just to be able to see how Obito deals with the situation he's currently in.

Already read first chap. Doing now or ill forget eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶

Good novel but the story is developing very hastily

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SELF REVIEW, Well I know I am not a good author and not good at grammar but I hope you like my work and I will try mybest to finish this fan fic :)