To anyone that thinks I am being a douche...go read the first chp...[the stupidity of the MC just shown in the first paragraph],....the character inst obito but some OC ****,,,,,,honestly the ideas amazing but its written badly
Leen_123
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LIKEcould ya re-write,,,the idea is actually gold, its the character...MC is too stupid and emotional to be obito
Leen_123:Btw thanks for the review, I really Appreciate it haha I try my best to correct things for all of u guys. I will try my best to be great hehe
amaturewriter:could ya re-write,,,the idea is actually gold, its the character...MC is too stupid and emotional to be obito