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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv43yramaturewriter

To anyone that thinks I am being a douche...go read the first chp...[the stupidity of the MC just shown in the first paragraph],....the character inst obito but some OC ****,,,,,,honestly the ideas amazing but its written badly

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Obito goes back in time to save everyone

Leen_123

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Leen_123
Leen_123AuthorLeen_123

Btw thanks for the review, I really Appreciate it haha I try my best to correct things for all of u guys. I will try my best to be great hehe

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

could ya re-write,,,the idea is actually gold, its the character...MC is too stupid and emotional to be obito

Leen_123:Btw thanks for the review, I really Appreciate it haha I try my best to correct things for all of u guys. I will try my best to be great hehe
Leen_123
Leen_123AuthorLeen_123

Sure thing, I patch things-up hehehe really appreciate it

amaturewriter:could ya re-write,,,the idea is actually gold, its the character...MC is too stupid and emotional to be obito
50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv1350ShadesOfAss

Why’s the cover drawn in a Korean manhwa style 😭

David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

Read the first chapter and Obito seems to be more immature than I expected.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

its kinda nice...but i get what ya mean

50ShadesOfAss:Why’s the cover drawn in a Korean manhwa style 😭