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Broken grammar, when reading, the flow of words is constantly broken. it is nothing like the fanfic he based it off of, except the copying ability. It's more like a gag-comic as he has a companion he suddenly forgets about, then adopts a child and soon becomes an obsessed big brother figure, it's just bad. But the fanfic it's based off of, is a 10/10*
I don't know if anyone other than me noticed this but as far as I read this novel it has a lot of things in common to another fanfic in webnovel named "I am in Marvel" but not all but copy and story it is almost same I think......... I don't know whether this is my imagination or not but I think you guys should check whether it's just my imagination or not (In my opinion this fanfic is almost a copy with some more things (wishes, travel) that that novel [*I am in MARVEL* ] but that novel doesn't have travel powers)
So he rusjed all the first few chaps and then decided tojust copy another novel off of here to set up his relationships with bucky and steve minus the actual good interesting and character building moments of the novel. Overall just lazy copying while adding his own twists in to make it his own character
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I was going to a flight 4 hours and I saw this novel âWowâ i thought this has sone nice reviews and so i downloaded it and went on the flight, the begenning was okayish but then it started plummiting, being on that flight became painful, the character was so shallow and every single character that was a female became part of some wierd harem if i could meet this author I would look straight at them and tell them that their story was one of the most painful expierences of my life. I have read some other marvel fanfiction and it was a chinese novel, even though it was translated it had better grammer then this, every third sentence has a gramatixal error and it was so bad I had to take time to figure out what the author was saying, and I read chinese webnovels! All in all avoid this and to the person who wrote this, I want you to know your work has genuienly made a person suffer.
This is a good story can you use Grammarly and go back over your work for errors. There are a lot of grammar mistakes. Great potential, please don't let the main character grow too fast, it messes up a lot of stories. If you fix the grammar and keep the pacing not too fast (possibly slow it down) this will be a wonderful story. Are you going to give the mc one bloodline or multiple, and how long do you plan this story to last?