AlexanderZane
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Keep it up mate and thanks
No harem.
The only novel that keeps me coming back to webnovel. Keep up the good work.
This is good. You have my votes from now on. Keep up the good work.
this fanfic is a gem. you have my vote from now on..
you mean fuinjutsu
condolence
Finally a fanfic written by someone who can truly be called a writer/author unlike those wannabes who keeps dumping trash here in WN. Keep it up.
*sigh* too bad naruto is naruko on this one.
This fanfic really needs an editor. Too much grammar mistakes.
I'm giving it a low rating based on my feel of the way it is written. After reading until the Invasion chapter, everything is like a narrative. Its bland, and felt rushed. Still good job for trying and sharing your work.
The flow of the story is like just a big narrative. Felt like you rushed things up.
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Bad grammar always ruin a good story. Hope he gets an editor for his future chapters. (I haven't checked the latest chapters yet.)